Nice to meet you again in my blog. Guys, in this writing I want to tell you about my experience. It happened last two months, exactly in six of February. Actually, I joined Taekwondo's training in our university. I have joined it about seven months.
In February 6th, there was a competition in Taekwondo organization called "Bupati Gunung Kidul Cup". I was one of the ten participants from our university in this competition. I was very happy but I also felt very nervous because it was the first time I followed the competition in Taekwondo.
Gunung Kidul was quite far from our campus, so we had to stay in a motel there before the days of the competition. We stayed there for three days, 5-7 of February. There, we were given many multivitamin, nutriment, good facilities, and of course many sport activities. When the day came, I felt more nervous than before because I had to fight with one of my teammates. I felt uncomfortable and didn't know what I had to do. I imagined what kinds of technique that I had to use in that round. We had the same trainer and of course he gave us the same material. I was really confused at that time. I shared my anxiety to my parents, my boyfriend, and my friends. They gave a lot of advice, suggestion, and spirit. They said that they wanted me to give a golden medal for them. It made me felt that I have a responsibility that I had to do .
When the time came, we had to fight. I made my self to be confident. Finally, I won the "War" and the score was 3-2. I said it was a war because I had to overcome the fear in my self and also my own friend. However, it was not over yet. I had to fight again with another competitors. She was from UNY (Universitas Negeri Yogyakarta). Thanked to God, I won this fight and the score was 11-9. I was really happy and also my team because we brought a golden medals as a gift. Four of my friends was also got medals. They got silver medals and bronze medals and I was the only one who got the golden medals.
When I told my father and my family, they were very proud of me. It made me felt happy and full of spirit to give them another victory, both in academic or in another field. It was an unforgettable experience in my life. Thanks God, thanks my father, thanks my family, thanks my boyfriend and thanks all my friends.
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wow, that was great,,,,,hmmm, and it also a kind of nice writing.....Just keep do your best ok?!?!
ReplyDeletewow...congratulation erika...
ReplyDelete@all: thanks sis...
ReplyDeleteCongrats........ sist........................
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ReplyDelete@yos: I wait you to join us in Taekwondo Bro...
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Hi Erica!!!Wow, I don’t know that you are a taekwondo athlet..Even you ever won a golden medal?!!Congratulation! ^^Anyway, your experience is very interesting. It looks like reading a novel, not a story..hehe, because I can feel the tention and the crisis in your story. I can imagine how nervous and scared you are. But, you got happy ending, right? Finally, you got the medal and made your parents proud of you. I like it!!
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It happened last two months, exactly in six of February. It happened last two months on sixth February.
. Actually, I joined Taekwondo's training in our university.
(you still join it until now, right? So, you must not use Past tense. Since it happens until now, you may use present perfect instead of using past tense,Ok?)
. It made me felt happy and full of spirit to give them another victory, (there are double verbs in your sentence, you may write like this . It made me happy and spiritful to give them another victory
Overall, your grammar and tense are already good. Keep practice and you will be better!!^^
thx sis...
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